This is a really good creepypasta-like story. Lynn is a troubled 15 year old girl living with her pregnant sister Jas and their working class parents in London. Their father has high expectations for her. This is a story about stress induced mental disorders, self hatred and failure. It certainly is not suitable for every reader, but for those who like this kind of story it is a good two hour read that won't disappoint you. Story - 8/10 Music - I can't decide. Is it a 2/10 or a 10/10? it's certainly weird, but it perfectly fits the story. So I'll go with a 10/10 Sprites - sparse, but ok. 5/10 Background art - run of the mill with some nice effects. 5/10 This (weighting the story higher) makes it a solid 8/10